The
Alienated Mistress; A Madrigal. (From An Unfinished Melodrama)
by
Samuel Taylor Coleridge
(Poem, Summary, & Analysis)
The
Alienated Mistress; A Madrigal. (From An Unfinished Melodrama)
Lady.
If
Love be dead (and you aver it!)
Tell
me, Bard! where Love lies buried.
Poet.
Love
lies buried where 'twas born,
Ah,
faithless nymph! think it no scorn
If
in my fancy I presume
To
name thy bosom poor Love's Tomb,
And
on that Tomb to read the line,
Here
lies a Love that once was mine,
But
took a chill, as I divine,
And
died at length of a decline.
Summary
The
poem unfolds as a brief yet poignant exchange between two characters: a Lady
and a Poet.
1.
The Lady's Inquiry:
The
poem opens with the Lady questioning the Poet about the death of Love. She
challenges his assertion that Love is dead by asking:
"If
Love be dead (and you aver it!)
Tell
me, Bard! where Love lies buried."
Her
inquiry is both rhetorical and accusatory, suggesting skepticism and a desire
for explanation regarding the demise of their romantic connection.
2.
The Poet's Response:
The
Poet replies that Love is buried where it was born, implying that the origin
and end of their love reside in the same place. He elaborates by metaphorically
identifying the Lady's heart as Love's tomb:
"Love
lies buried where 'twas born,
Ah,
faithless nymph! think it no scorn
If
in my fancy I presume
To
name thy bosom poor Love's Tomb,"
He
continues by imagining an epitaph on this metaphorical tombstone, stating that
Love, once his, succumbed to a gradual decline:
"And
on that Tomb to read the line,
Here
lies a Love that once was mine,
But
took a chill, as I divine,
And
died at length of a decline."
Through
this exchange, the Poet attributes the death of their love to the Lady's
perceived faithlessness, suggesting that her actions led to Love's gradual
demise.
This
madrigal, though brief, encapsulates a narrative of love's birth,
deterioration, and death, conveyed through a metaphorical dialogue between the
two characters.
Analysis
in Detail
Title
Analysis:
"The
Alienated Mistress; A Madrigal"
"Alienated
Mistress" immediately suggests emotional or relational estrangement. The
woman in question is not merely distant but emotionally disconnected from her
lover.
"A
Madrigal" refers to a short lyrical poem, often with romantic or pastoral
themes, and usually set to music. This gives the poem a lyrical, performative
quality.
"(From
An Unfinished Melodrama)" hints at theatricality and possibly
exaggeration, adding a self-aware or even ironic layer to the emotional
exchange between the characters.
Structure
and Voice:
The
poem is structured as a dialogue — a miniature dramatic scene between two
characters:
Lady:
She opens with a question that is both confrontational and rhetorical.
Poet:
Responds with metaphorical and poetic language, full of emotional accusation
and imagery.
This
duality creates a mini play, echoing the melodramatic nature suggested in the
subtitle. The format adds intensity and drama to the short piece, imitating a
scene from a larger emotional narrative.
Themes
and Motifs:
1.
Love and Loss
The
central theme is the death of love. The Lady's question sets up this theme by
confronting the idea of Love’s death. The Poet confirms it with finality and
even describes where and how Love died.
"Love
lies buried where 'twas born"
This
suggests a cyclical nature — love began and ended in the same place — possibly
in the Lady’s heart.
2.
Blame and Betrayal
There’s
a clear tone of blame in the Poet’s words. By calling her a “faithless nymph,”
he directly accuses the Lady of disloyalty or indifference.
"Ah,
faithless nymph! think it no scorn
If
in my fancy I presume
To
name thy bosom poor Love's Tomb"
This
metaphor paints her heart as the grave of Love, implying she killed it through
coldness or betrayal.
3.
Decay vs. Sudden Death
The
Poet doesn’t say Love was murdered — he says it declined and eventually died.
"And
died at length of a decline."
This
could suggest a gradual loss of affection, perhaps due to emotional neglect or
disillusionment. The slow death contrasts with more violent images of
heartbreak, hinting at resignation rather than shock.
Tone
and Language:
Tone:
The poem moves between bitterness, sorrow, and irony. The Lady’s tone is
sarcastic, and the Poet’s tone is mournful but pointed.
Diction:
Coleridge uses elevated, poetic language — “nymph,” “tomb,” “decline” — which
both romanticizes and dramatizes the situation.
Irony:
There’s a layer of irony in how love’s demise is described so poetically. The
use of the word “madrigal” — typically associated with harmony and beauty —
contrasts with the subject of emotional estrangement.
Imagery
and Symbolism:
Love
as a Living Thing: The metaphor of Love being born, declining, and dying
personifies it — it becomes a character with its own arc.
The
Tomb: The Lady’s bosom (heart) is the tomb — symbolizing that the love once
nourished there has now died and is entombed in coldness or loss.
The
Epitaph: The lines the Poet imagines on Love’s tomb serve as a poetic summary
of their failed relationship, immortalizing his heartbreak.
Contextual
Notes (Coleridge’s Style & Period):
Coleridge
often explored psychological states, emotional depth, and the tension between
idealism and disillusionment.
His
Romantic contemporaries frequently used similar metaphors to convey intense
personal experiences.
The
fact that this is from an “unfinished melodrama” suggests he was experimenting
with theatrical or performative forms of poetry — possibly parodying or
exaggerating romantic tropes.
Conclusion:
The
Alienated Mistress; A Madrigal is a short but layered poem in which Coleridge
condenses the emotional arc of a failed relationship into a brief, lyrical
dialogue. Through metaphor, structure, and tone, he paints a scene of bitter
realization and poetic blame. While the Lady’s question is sharp and
provocative, the Poet’s reply is emotionally rich, sorrowful, and subtly
accusatory, leaving the reader with the image of love that slowly faded and
found its grave in the heart where it once bloomed.
Paraphrase
Original
Lines
Lady.
If
Love be dead (and you aver it!)
Tell
me, Bard! where Love lies buried.
Modern
Paraphrase
Lady:
If
love is really dead (as you claim it is),
Then
tell me, poet—where is it buried?
Original
Lines
Poet.
Love
lies buried where 'twas born,
Ah,
faithless nymph! think it no scorn
If
in my fancy I presume
To
name thy bosom poor Love's Tomb,
Modern
Paraphrase
Poet:
Love
is buried right where it was born—
Oh,
unfaithful lady! Don’t take offense
If I
imagine, in my own mind,
That
your heart is the tomb where Love now rests.
Original
Lines
And
on that Tomb to read the line,
Here
lies a Love that once was mine,
But
took a chill, as I divine,
And
died at length of a decline.
Modern
Paraphrase
And
on that tomb, I can picture the inscription:
“Here
lies a love that once belonged to me,
But
it caught a chill, or so I believe,
And
slowly faded away until it died.”

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